
Beyond the Trees:
The Poetics of Wellesley
A Brief Guide to "Looking Critically"
This is, in an abstract way, a guide to writing nature/landscape poetry.
But when one sets out to write a poem, the very deliberate action of SETTING OUT TO WRITE A POEM can be the most intimidating part of the process. Instead, try what I call “looking critically:” observing the space around you and letting the poem -- or whatever it might end up being -- take shape.
I keep a running tab of observations on my phone. These can be anything from funny things my friends say to compelling images to snippets of other texts to random phrases I like the sound of, but more often than not, they tend to be reactions to the world around me. When I want to write something, I scour through these observations looking for common threads -- as Michelangelo put it, “the statue in the stone.”
If some facet of something has caught my attention multiple times, I’m obviously interested in it, so I should write about it! This process works particularly well when you’re trying to write about the natural world. Try these steps as a starting point:
- Settle yourself somewhere in nature. It can be a place you frequent, or somewhere you’ve never been before, or anywhere in between.
- For at least a few minutes (but as long as you want!) write down your observations and impressions of the world around you. Don’t worry about making them coherent -- let alone poetic. All you need to do is take stock of your surroundings.
- Once you feel like it, go back over these observations and look for anything to which you find yourself returning: a sound, a word, an image, a general commonality or theme. Ask yourself: Why am I paying attention to this? What made this element of my observation compelling? You can go in a lot of different directions with this analysis: word/image association, linear narrative, doing the exact opposite of what you’ve already written, etc.
- The final step of this exercise is not writing a poem, or even starting a draft of one (although, if you feel so inspired…). “Looking critically” doesn’t need to end with any sort of material production; it’s just a process of understanding and analyzing the ways in which you observe the world around you.
Go forth, and look--
(For reference -- an example of my own process. Note, at the very top of the page, the "I was not unhappy" that later appears in the poem March 1st!)